Logo design

og_atrophy's picture

Hello all,
As you can tell I am new here but have been a lurker for quite some time. Trying to gather tips and any other helpful info that will help me with my design work. I am self taught and I'm still working on a lot of things, one of which is lettering. I am here to ask for some assistance with a current design I am working on, whether that assistance be constructive criticism, hate or even a simple "I like it". any thoughts, ideas or opinions will prove helpful at this point. As of now I've got two separate ideas that are very similar but have one distinct difference so any help with which looks best would also be greatly appreciated. with that said, here it is...

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timd's picture

Initially, I see a problem with the t having no ascender, and the crowded kerning towards the end of the word.

What is the logo for or is it just practice?

Tim

og_atrophy's picture

Mostly just for practice. I'm working towards something that will eventually be used on a couple of hats for myself. With that being said and it being representative of me and my work I would like to make sure that it is as good looking as it can be. I appreciate the help Tim. any other ideas as to what might possibly make it look more complete/smooth?

Luma Vine's picture

I would rethink how the underline interacts with the 3 letters in 3 different ways.

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