Thoughts on this new font I am creating, please?

Adrian Valenz's picture

It is inspired by a mix of Limelight and Bodoni. Just started, but would like to get some feedback.

I am calling it Pavilion.



PublishingMojo's picture

It's fun, I'm looking forward to seeing more. My only comment at this point is that the serifs at the end of the thin strokes on L and N look too insubstantial to balance the thick strokes. I don't feel that way about the A and the V, maybe because the serifs have a little more heft, or maybe because the thin stroke isn't quite as thin (and on the A, it gets thicker toward the serif).

Adrian Valenz's picture

You are right, the N looks fragile. I will give the serif some more heft. You gave me an idea for the L as well.

hrant's picture

I like it.

hhp

Luma Vine's picture

Yea this has tons of potential.

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