I like the overall feel; but the 'wings' look too much like three-fingered hands. Possibly having the wingtips more feathery, or at least much less rounded - maybe pointer ends at the 'top' sides.

I agree that the wings look like fingers (in a glove, maybe)

It might need some kind of point-you can even keep some sort of rounded tips if you wish.

Font feels too rigid, maybe something that is shorter/more round?
Could work at a smaller size than the wings & with less spacing.

Post an updated version soon :]

Have a go through the kerning as well. /sa/ compared to /ah/ especially stands out.

an update - excuse my english

I think you should use the outermost shape for all.

Sorry to be a wet blanket, but the revised wings now look to me even MORE like hands - with a pointing finger with a fingernail. For some 'feathering' examples and ideas, you might try to Google images for cartoon wings.

- Herb

The hands suggest handmade to me. Is that the right market?

To make the wings look less like hands, how about making them wider. You could also consider making the slope of the "arm" part of the wing steeper than that of the "feathers" part.

I like the first wings better. They from like hands at work --that is how the minimalist design is achieved. But what I would like to see is a tighter gap between the wings and the text. That will somehow punctuate minimalism.

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@litera Not yet.

Will come with an update soon.