Typeface in progress

lex's picture

Dear forum members,

This is a typeface in progress (Thin version) - at this point, kerning etc. is only very basic.

What I need in terms of critique and feedback is a general first impression when you look at the attached PDF. Of course any other - maybe more detailed feedback - would be very much appreciated!

Thank you.
Alex

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1996type's picture

This is already quite good. IMO all you need is some character. Try to add some personality to it.

LexLuengas's picture

I do recognize some personality in the slight rectangularity of the round shapes (e.g. O, ). Experiment exaggerating that feature. That would be your starting point, I'd say. Good Work! There's not much to comment, it's a minimalistic design.

lex's picture

Thank you very much for the valuable input and feedback!

JoePrince's picture

Maybe it's just me, but I'd say what you did is an exercise in creating a font heavily based off Gotham.

Trevor Baum's picture

/Sacker's Gothic.

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