feather hair extension Business Card

blackquartz's picture

hello typophiles. this is a business card i've made for someone starting a feather hair extension service. please critique, any criticism will help. thank you.

blackquartz's picture

oh yeah, the reason i used the turquoise color, is because she said its her favorite color. lol.

Luma Vine's picture

I don't think you need to put the title 'contact information', it should be obvious without it. Maybe there could be more leading on the contact info?

Catharsis's picture

I liked the thin font for the main title in the first version a lot. Is that St Marie? The script font in your latest version is extremely generic, and the mustard color is a step backwards to, in my opinion.

Also, are you sure the girl's name is Shirlery, rather than Shirley?

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