The project is to pick a song lyric and express it through typography. The song I was is 'Playing In Her Hair' by the Dream.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=og7WtVSt7KQ
I know, I know, it's an R&B song.
Here are two digital sketches I've created. Which one do you think has more potential.
Any typographic suggestions would be greatly appreciated as well, thank you!