typography project. suggestions needed

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The project is to pick a song lyric and express it through typography. The song I was is 'Playing In Her Hair' by the Dream.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=og7WtVSt7KQ
I know, I know, it's an R&B song.
Here are two digital sketches I've created. Which one do you think has more potential.
Any typographic suggestions would be greatly appreciated as well, thank you!


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oh yeah, the second image, "HAIR" is cut off. I did this on purpose. I wanted to express, going into her hair...

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this is really driving my nuts

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okay, its all done! Thanks you guys.


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