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Hi all
Im 'trying' to become more skilled in type design and here is an example of one of my early work. It is not based on a particular pre -designed font. Constructive feedback is more than welcome:-)
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14 Jun 2010 — 4:54am
Zahra, you’ll have better luck and get better responses to your request for feedback if you post this in one of the Typophile Critique forums. This sort of thing is precisely what those are intended for.
14 Jun 2010 — 5:26am
Thank you kenlew. I just posted it on the forum. Sorry! im kinda new here x
14 Jun 2010 — 3:04pm
It is always easier to tell the utility of a typeface if you show some us some words. :)
14 Jun 2010 — 4:15pm
Yes, some words would be nice. :]
Just looking at the alphabet though, some things do stand out to me.
- /v/ and /u/ may need more differentiation
- the strokes could remain thin when curves meet stems (for example, in /h/)
- it kind of feels as though /s/ ought to have those big ball terminals...
Anyway, I'd hardly call myself even at the level of novice, so take my words with a grain of salt!
14 Jun 2010 — 7:41pm
That's absolutely fine. Thank you for your feedback :-)
21 Jun 2010 — 5:17pm
Any opinions on the T?
21 Jun 2010 — 10:03pm
The short t is unusual but it may work. One thing you could try is to make the crossbar longer, to give the letter more presence since it's so small.
22 Jun 2010 — 2:43am
Also, you could raise the t above x-height.
I would have it a little more "sitting" too.
25 Jun 2010 — 4:31am
Hello and thank you all for taking time to view my work. Here I have made a few changes and designed the numerals. Do tell me what you think:-)
25 Jun 2010 — 4:33am