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Just wanted to show the progression of this identity so far. It's a while from finished but I'm trying to get as much feedback as possible, hopefully create my first identity that is worthy of putting into a portfolio. :)
Please keep in mind these are at various stages of presentation, so if possibly to remove that from your opinion and focus on the ideas that would be much appreciated and more useful for me.
edit: Thankyou Michel for explaining that for me, I will keep the images a bit narrower as well in the future. :)