Hand Drawn Logo

chevon's picture

This needs alot of work. All comments welcome.Baby Steps Logo

cgonzalez's picture

chevon

please tell us details about the logo, in wich area do they work, because if itn is a kindergarden it seems very creepy to me.

CG

cgonzalez's picture

chevon

please tell us details about the logo, in wich area do they work, because if itn is a kindergarden it seems very creepy to me.

CG

aaron_carambula's picture

<font class="dontLookLikeCrap">Yeah if this is for a rock concert, a book, a movie, it could make a great, beautiful mark. I think your drawing is well done. If this is for babies, you might want to soften it up a bit, cause it kinda wants to kill me.
Context is key.
Though it does look good.

Aaron</font>



oh man, that would be an AWESOME concert!

photo's picture

This has gotta be for a band or something like that I think.
Looks great I think, reminds me of something thats been on this forum before but I cant think what...

pablohoney77's picture

on a purely technical standpoint, i think you might wanna iron out those kinks in your swashies. As they are now they look a little mechanical/inorganic. I think some nice smooth swashes would give great balance to the heavily angular letters. just my two bits.

chevon's picture

Thanks for the comments. Yes, I want to get all of the kinks ironed out in the swashes - good point. What I'm really concerned with is trying to figure out the "logic" of the letters and how they relate to each other. I want to make sure all of the letters follow the same rules and look like they came from the same typeface - that is, of course, except for the capital "B" and "S".

The client is a design agency and they want the logo to look like a cigar box logo - not for kids!

markatos's picture

The E seems to be out place. It's missing some spurs and curves. The capital B is also somewhat difficult the to read.

I recommend busting out some circles and perfecting those curves as well.

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