Brewery Wordmark Legibility
I'm primarily looking for feedback on name legibility at this point. Being that the type is hand drawn, and the word is uncommon, I'm worried about the viewer's ability to pick up the name. How well does it read, and what do you read? Any feedback would be appreciated.
Cheers,
Jim





19.Jan.2010 10.47am
Much better than before. Easily read as Tommyknocker
19.Jan.2010 12.25pm
I agree, this reads fine now. I would lighten up that first O a bit, though. My eye keeps getting pulled in that direction because it seems so much heavier in comparison.
19.Jan.2010 12.46pm
I find it very readable and quite personable. I agree with Stephan, the first O is a bit heavy.
19.Jan.2010 10.01pm
And maybe the second K?
19.Jan.2010 10.03pm
Looks good though!
20.Jan.2010 12.36am
far better to read than the first time, no doubt. I agree that the first O and second K could be lightened up a bit though, to improve eye movement. Otherwise one helluva good logotype!
21.Jan.2010 2.12am
not much to knock here
:)