Brewery Wordmark Legibility

jimsbee's picture

I'm primarily looking for feedback on name legibility at this point. Being that the type is hand drawn, and the word is uncommon, I'm worried about the viewer's ability to pick up the name. How well does it read, and what do you read? Any feedback would be appreciated.

Cheers,

Jim

penn's picture

Much better than before. Easily read as Tommyknocker

Stephen Rapp's picture

I agree, this reads fine now. I would lighten up that first O a bit, though. My eye keeps getting pulled in that direction because it seems so much heavier in comparison.

aluminum's picture

I find it very readable and quite personable. I agree with Stephan, the first O is a bit heavy.

MattBurns's picture

And maybe the second K?

MattBurns's picture

Looks good though!

ishbog's picture

far better to read than the first time, no doubt. I agree that the first O and second K could be lightened up a bit though, to improve eye movement. Otherwise one helluva good logotype!

Amicus's picture

not much to knock here

:)

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