[logo] Grupa Interaktywni

smylek's picture

Hello,

I am looking for some critique.

This is a logo proposal for the company Grupa Interaktywni. They make corporate identity, websites etc.

What do you guys think?

Ratbaggy's picture

sure.

you're going to have to give us more to work with to get anything constructive.

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Paul
Design Studio Melbourne

riccard0's picture

The windmill mark is nice, but overall the composition feels crowded and unbalanced.

smylek's picture

I have made more space between the mark and text.
I think it looks better now.

peter_b's picture

I think the word 'GRUPA' might get lost if you use the whole logo at a small size.

Also I'm having a slight problem reading the logo. It might be because it's in a foreign language, but I wonder if the problem isn't helped by the use of all caps. Maybe try it without the use of caps, or perhaps space out 'INTERAKTYWNI' a little.

Hope that helps.

smylek's picture

Yes, you have the problem with reading because it is a polish language. I don't think there is a problem for Poles. But thanks.

smylek's picture

And this is final logo with color. Hope you like it.

MrKikkoman's picture

Does anyone else find it odd that he is making a logo for a company that makes logos?

Anyways...
I still think it could use some more spacing adjustments in INTERAKTYWNI. Not a fan of the colors but it could just be a cultural thing.

nina's picture

I'm not sure why, but it looks a bit like a logo for a new bank trying to look very serious. :-\

Colors: I think their difference in darkness/saturation can work for the mark, but not so well in the type – GRUPA seems too active/strong compared to INTERAKTYWNI.

Spacing: Can anything be done about the holes in there (look at "KTY"!)? You should at least *try* loosening the rest of the spacing to get it more-or-less even. But maybe it's too loose then. I guess a higher-class thing to attempt would be a T_Y ligature.

Glyphs: Some seem too dark. The "W" needs help, and the "K". But that sort of stuff is hard to tell at this size. What font is that anyway?

brianskywalker's picture

Don't mean to sound evil, but looks like it could be Arial.

Briän

nina's picture

That's exactly why I asked.

aluminum's picture

I think I'd like the mark without the dots (just the bars).

apankrat's picture

That would make the i's in the mark go away.

penn's picture

That would make the i’s in the mark go away.

No, they'd just be capital :p

penn

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