HERB LUBALIN tribute poster

joseph_le's picture

Below is the link to my Herb Lubalin Tribute Typography Poster.
Can you please critique this? Much help would be appreciated.

http://www.behance.net/Gallery/Herb-Lubalin-Tribute-Poster-09/286094

Thoughts?

SF Typist's picture

My thought is that if it's a poster, there's alot of text to read.

Is there a way you could show it without saying so much textwise? maybe 3 key type examples might do it. You're already starting to get some type forms, maybe select 3 and push them...

Miss Tiffany's picture

Too much white space. ;) The type should be packed tighter.

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