HERB LUBALIN tribute poster

joseph_le's picture

Below is the link to my Herb Lubalin Tribute Typography Poster.
Can you please critique this? Much help would be appreciated.



SF Typist's picture

My thought is that if it's a poster, there's alot of text to read.

Is there a way you could show it without saying so much textwise? maybe 3 key type examples might do it. You're already starting to get some type forms, maybe select 3 and push them...

Miss Tiffany's picture

Too much white space. ;) The type should be packed tighter.

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