Please critique this recycling website

independent's picture

Hi Everyone,

I would really appreciate your comments on this website...So far we only have a front page...and even that's not finished.

The venture is a mobile recycling company that will pay money for old phones. These will be refitted/ recycled etc...and the profits are to go to a charity, that raises funds for children's education.The proposition is cash for phones that people have discarded. target market- anyone within UK, 16-35, has more than 1 phone, is thrifty or cares deeply for the environment.

The problem I am having, is that I am a marketing person, not a designer. The company actually programming and creating the website is absolutely no help.

So please do throw some suggestions around on colours, layout, pictures and most importantly, the copy.

blank's picture

Posting this in the forum labeled “Critique” will probably get you more responses.

Miss Tiffany's picture

I've moved the thread to Critique: Typography/Composition

independent's picture


I really hope for some good responses, as I am alone on this

independent. NOT

(no man is an island....)

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