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Here is Novena, a serif family (still in progress) initially aimed to newspapers requirement though, in addition, I’m developing a display version too.
Feel free to criticize.
I post it in the hope of having some help from smarter people.
Thank you.

20 Jan 2009 — 6:01am
This looks really nice. I don't know if I count as "smarter people" but I did notice that the 9 feels like it's rotated to the left a few degrees.
20 Jan 2009 — 10:14am
Thank you, Jon. They're right both things: you are smarter than I, and my 9 is slightly unbalanced (worse when Novena means Ninth!!!).
Here it goes my correction. Hope it looks better than the previous version.
21 Jan 2009 — 5:45am
Here it goes the most recent upgrade to Novena, including some major adjustments.
Be evil!
21 Jan 2009 — 7:06am
To me the "9" still feels like it's tipping over.
And the curvy serifs on top of VWXY and M, I don't get those. It looks like something heavy fell on these letters ;-). Why are the serifs curved on these letters and not on any others?
But, remember I'm just a beginner in this, so this might well be some sort of smart principle I'm just not getting.
EDIT: I just realized you may have changed the curvy serifs in your newest version, in which case I take that back.
It'd probably help to have a PDF; the lettershapes are kind of hard to make out in this size.
21 Jan 2009 — 9:37am
Thank you, Altaira: you don't need to apologize by no means. I use to read your comments and I think they are very shrewd.
I completely redesigned the 9 and the 6 in this new version, and I guess they look much better than before.
Actually, all serifs are curvy, but in the A, K, M, N, U, V, W, X and Y I tried a variation (dismissed now in uppercases, still in progress for lowercases) by pushing the inner vertex up or down accordingly. As you say, it doesn't work well.
So, take a look at this rearranged model (in addition, I'll put a PDF for inspection in my Typophile blog).
Thanks again, sharp buddy.
21 Jan 2009 — 2:36pm
The new 6 and 9 are much better. However, based on the PDF version, I think the dots on i and j are too heavy.
21 Jan 2009 — 2:46pm
Hi Marcelo,
I looked at your latest pdf. I'm certainly a beginner as well so feel free to ignore everything I write :)
The overall effect is very nice, with the shapes and colour pretty consistent and harmonious.
There are a few things that don't quite look right to my eye. The c looks a bit as if it were modelled on the e, and I think the bottom half could curve in more, as it looks a bit flat. I like e. I'd make the ear of the g heavier (longer and fatter), and perhaps lose some weight off the inside of the upper curve to balance the colour. j looks a little incomplete somehow. I think the diagonal leg of the k could be lighter. r,s and t are especially good. Maybe try stronger serifs on the z?
As for capitals, the stem of D looks a bit thin compared with the bowl. E and F and nice, but I think the lower bar of E could be too far out. The tail of the J is very heavy and will look weird if next to a C for example. M could be a bit too narrow. Tail on Q is too light I think. S and T look to be different weights.
I like your numerals. I suspect 1 will need much heavier serifs and its head may need to be wider. 3 and 5 need to harmonise a bit more. 4 looks light. 6 and 9 may be a bit too wide. 9 needs more space. It also still looks rotated!
Your punctuation is pleasant. I think £ may be out of place and need a base like your E. € could be narrower.
I hope that's useful, I'm only making suggestions so see what you think and try them out if you like.
23 Jan 2009 — 12:42pm
New version of Novena text, all glyphs adjusted and “equalized”.
Finally, I guess my 9 stands on itself and all serifs fit.
As speter suggested, dots on i and j are lighter.
Let's follow with Bendy ;-) :
Well, here it is Novena revamped (Notice: the new PDF is in my blog, as usual, or clicking here):
25 Jan 2009 — 12:48pm
Really good! Your typeface has a playful and light-hearted demeanour, yet it retains its text-setting qualities. If I were to criticise anything, I'd say the arm serifs of E and F are a little light. I'd also consider doing something to tame the ascender serifs a little, but I guess that's a question of taste. They work just fine as they are.
Are you planning on making a display version of Novena as well?
25 Jan 2009 — 2:19pm
Thanks four your words, Sindre (Satyagraha).
Actually, I made some corrections on Novena I'll publish tomorrow.
And, yes there are several versions in progress, wich include:
beyond their obvious:
variants going into the oven.
Return in short.
25 Jan 2009 — 6:32pm
Getting better?
More on PDF in my blog.
26 Jan 2009 — 9:44am
I might try more weight on these serifs:
- top of 'a' (possibly)
- ear of 'r' (probably)
- top of 'c' (definitely)
I also think the two-way standard serifs on the baseline (fhilmnr etc etc) could be a little heavier. You might also want to extend the 'r''s bottom serif on the right even more.
Because it drops towards the serif, the base of '2' doesn't look like it sits solidly on the baseline.
'B' and '4' look a little dark to me.
26 Jan 2009 — 10:31am
Dear Eliason,
perhaps these close views or that PDF render better than the previous picture. Tell me what you think.
I'll consider your observations on 2 and 4.
26 Jan 2009 — 11:35am
Well: here you can see the last PDF built on Novena at its current state (2009.01.26).
I made some minor changes based on Eliason's sharp observations.
26 Jan 2009 — 1:20pm
Some additional ideas:
- make B's lower bowl bigger in relation to the top bowl.
- Where bowls come off stems in the caps (BDPR), consider using the same "cupping" you do for the stem-only serifs. This Goudy sample is an exaggerated version of what I'm talking about:
See how the bowl at the top swoops up before it circles down? Without that, your serifs (which are rather long) on the left sides of those letters look bent outwards.
- K's leg doesn't look as stable as it should.
- take another look at the humps of m, n, and u. Something's off on the drawing there - I think they thicken too fast coming out of the stem? I think that contributes to the topheavy sense of m and n that I was addressing before by suggesting heavier bottom serifs.
- your cedilla has an italic slant to it - I'd make it more upright.
Seek opinions from others on these ideas, too - I'm not an expert.
10 Feb 2009 — 10:05am
Here there are some variations on the UPPERCASE alphabet for Novena I've been studying for a while.
I think they have some improvements before previous versions, but I'd love to hear opinions from anybody else in order to mark me errors that my immediate point of view does not allow me to notice.
MarS
10 Feb 2009 — 2:43pm
Unspaced sample, just to see how chars work together.