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So... I think I did a good job typesetting this... but...

cotdamn
19.Nov.2008 6.10pm
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Let me know your thoughts...

I have always considered myself a decent typographer, but have never really had my stuff critiqued by people that know what they are talking about... just coworkers, etc. So, in my mind I did a good job on this... but I would like to know what you guys see as places that improvements could be made.

Thanks in advance.

this board is absolutely beautiful, btw.

gerald
19.Nov.2008 7.11pm
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dude.

did you just post that on b3s recently? or am i having a stroke


cotdamn
19.Nov.2008 8.16pm
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www.cotdamn.com


cotdamn
19.Nov.2008 8.17pm
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yes... and no you're good... no stroke.


gerald
19.Nov.2008 8.39pm
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amazing.

i personally would tighten up the GE and probably the MO and the ON but that's just me


Quincunx
20.Nov.2008 3.41pm
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I would probably have decreased the leading a bit. :)


chadengle
20.Nov.2008 4.15pm
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I personally would have tightened it up across the board. I think that the "That" is pretty damn perfect. I woulda stuck with that spacing throughout. Great outcome and shirt design however. Keep it up.