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Yas2er logo . Please Critiques
Posted by Yas2eR in
24 Oct 2008 — 1:29pm
24 Oct 2008 — 1:29pm
Hello guys
am working as motion artist for long time but actully this my first time to do a logo for me ... i wasent have much time for my personal stuff .. its like 7 years ago in the business .. and never took that rest to this step before
anyway ..
im not a typefacer .. sure i deal with typography in my work as motion graphicer.. but im not a font maker .. but i need to know your opinions you guys about my logo as typerfacers and professionals in this field and any advice i can work with to fix my logo ..
about the style and the way too effects there .. becouse its not for print yet .. i just draw it fast in photoshop ( i will clear it out with cmyk colors and print issues someday . i just need to finish my logo to make my own showReel )
sorry for the language
and yeah forgot to say ... the logo says ( Yas2er ) .. please Critique
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24 Oct 2008 — 1:39pm
i see by myself serval problems ..some i cant getit .. i think unbalanced ?? .. and long way word ?? ..and fat text ?
i just cant solve the problems in my own eyes ..you know its very hard to do a personal logo for yourself .. haha
25 Oct 2008 — 12:44am
Is this for an early 1980s metal revival band? if so, don't change a thing. Actually, make the 'ER' look more like 'ER', but that's it.
If it's not for a rock group, then I'd reconsider the treatment.
- Lex
26 Oct 2008 — 12:31pm
Very well put Lex. :)
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Robert Koritnik
27 Oct 2008 — 6:14am
Absolutely
27 Oct 2008 — 1:38pm
I would apply more effects in photoshop. Why half-as$ it?
27 Oct 2008 — 1:45pm
Just kidding. Seriously though if you want interlocking letters attempt to draw it by hand with a pen and see where that gets you. This angular blade-like thing has so many issues that don't allow it to work well as a logo.
Maybe you got carried away thinking about how you would handle it in After Effects or Maya. Try to make a solid mark first.