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I've been commissioned to design a poster detailing a Champagne offer in a trendy lounge in my hometown, and I'd like your opinion on the copy as opposed to the design (which is in early stages) of the poster.
Additionally, some opinions on the typography would be greatly appreciated.
PS: I've hosted the image elsewhere incase the file upload service fails: