You have spacing problems with the word Severe. Start by looking at the first group of letters as a unit. Look at the SEV relationship, the gap between the E and V makes the S look too tight, the balance is off. Same can be said with the VER combination. The last E is just floating by its lonesome self. After adjusting the VER combination, see what you need to do with the last E.
One last thought drop the V down so the top is even with the E's and let the bottom of the V separate Extreme Eating from Do you dare to indulge?

The stroke weight is all wrong, the S is a bit sloppy in its curve transition and serifs, the R is weak. Why is the end E orange/red?
You could try something like this with the V:

Absolutely no offense to anyone in this restaurant logo class, but, out of curiosity, do you not have peer critiques within class?