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SuperUltraFabulous's picture

I like Adelto set in Cocon at the top, but the bottom does not seem to match.

rbarker21's picture

Hi there SUF!

Yeah it does not seem to run through correctly, as we will be selling high-end funriture, bespke products and building services, we want to look contemporary and modern (cocon) and also luxurious (the tagline) i might not have the tagline, but it just helps with the brand, lets people know what we are about, can you think of a font that would be better suited? All suggestions and ideas are welcomed!!

Thanks for your input,

Richard

http://www.adelto.co.uk

jazzhustler's picture

I think it looks great, but I agree with SUF that the font for the strapline doesn't quite look the right font, being just a tad too 'sharp'. If you can try some other serif fonts I'm sure you'll find one that works better. I'm also wondering if the strapline could be a little closer to the main logo, but i'm sure you tried all these things before settling with the layout you currently have. I was just thinking maybe a little more equilibrium between the tracking of the strapline letters & the space between the strapline & the logo.

Glad you feel you can still come here for opinions.

JH

SuperUltraFabulous's picture

A neutral sans would be nice... Helvetica?

Perhaps Stephen Coles can suggest one to you as he might know a good complement for Cocon.

cslem1's picture

Well have to say glad you picked this one out of the original bunch :) Looks great though, great color choice. Not a heavy black, but not a really light gray. Adds an element of sophistication. As for getting "nit picky" I think another font for the tag is in order as everyone else has said. I also want to see it a tad darker. Only a few shades, nothing too drastic. Or same shade and a slightly thicker font. I just think it sort of gets lost especially being a little far from the main part of the logo.

rbarker21's picture

Thanks for the positive feedback :) Its really appreciated, i`ll have a word with the developer as its not yet finished and he still wants to do some refinements, but its nearly there!!! i`ll keep you all up-to-date on here!!

Keep the comments coming also!!

Thanks

http://www.adelto.co.uk

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