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I can't really tell how the lines should be spaced, especially the spacing between "geese" and the next line. I'd also appreciate critique of the kerning.
I had originally planned on using animals whose names happened not to have descenders, so I had to change the design a bit when geese suddenly became funny at my school. I sort of like the descender, but I feel like I need to fill some of the space to its right.