Feedback more than welcome...

Rez Oo
29 Feb 2008 — 3:58am

Welcome to the forums! : )

Well... I see a pencil. Is something going on with the 'rubber' tip..?

Personal comments;
Keep it simple. Is there too much going on? Strip it right down to the core. Will it work as 1 colour, grayscale even?
Im still trying to figure out what its saying... or the wit within it, should I say.

Ill be interested to see what this turns out like.

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itsgareth
29 Feb 2008 — 4:32am

Thanks for your comments Rez,looking forward to more peoples opinions before I explain it..hopefully I wont need to.

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inde
29 Feb 2008 — 5:05am

hello, im new to here, i think you will enjoy it!

what this pencil brings me in mind... is the word VOID.
why is that? well the first part is like an individual speaking on transmitting a message, thats where i get vo... (voice) thi midle part brings me a (i) simply because of the shape and similarly the last part brings me out a (D)... so i see void and i actually like it a lot.

I would say that the nature of business that this mark was intended to represent is a comunicational party, or transmitional party, something like blogs, probably, because of the fact that in blogs, people "write" their oppinions, they "submit" their thoughts ...

i dont know if i got even close to what the logos actual work is but i think thta if you consider the above you will find that it is a pretty much logical explanation.

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itsgareth
29 Feb 2008 — 6:56am

Il give you a hint, the company is called "dreamscape"

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aluminum
29 Feb 2008 — 7:09am

It's OK to have to explain the meaning behind a logo. A logo doesn't have to tell a novel-length story all by itself.

That said, I see a green pencil with a D on the end and a speaker icon on the front.

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itsgareth
29 Feb 2008 — 7:12am

Thanks for your comments darrel, think I recognise your work from the pond ;)

Do you think this will design will perform well for a design agency? or is the pencil a bit of a cliche??

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picard102
29 Feb 2008 — 10:01am

I see radio waves, and a D

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aluminum
29 Feb 2008 — 12:22pm

I'd say a pencil is cliche in the way scales of justice are cliche for a lawyer or a hammer is cliche for a carpenter.

Sometimes, it's OK to use a cliche ;o)

It's a nicely designed pencil, so I'd say, sure, it will work just fine for that purpose.

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iffy
29 Feb 2008 — 2:06pm

To me a pencil says elementary school.

I see the D also, obviously.

I'm guessing the front of the pencil with the led is supposed to be some sort of waves? Sound waves?

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itsgareth
5 Mar 2008 — 4:58am

Thanks everyone for the feedback on this. Heres another concept I have developed and moulded from the previous design. Still not set on the colours, but would love some feedback if possible. Again let me know what you see, cheers!