Very friendly looking. I'd enjoy seeing a few sample headlines set in mixed case. My eyes are stopping particularly on the cap S and Z - which seem heavier than the rest of the uppercase. I like the quirkiness of the stroke junction I the X/x, and wonder if this could be applied elsewhere in the font - perhaps R or K? The little beard serif on the cap G made me smile.

Here are some revistions to the typeface. I changed the lowercase a, Fixed the J/j pair, Rounded the N, Thined down the Z, anded the beadrd to the u, and made the P & R wider. Please let me know what you think, and thank you for all your input.

Thanks,
Brad

Hi Brad,

Much improved. A couple of observations:

-- The top cross bars on the E and F seem droopy and tired. Perhaps handle it like the letter T? (With the T: the horizontal stroke seems heavier than the vertical stroke.)

-- The J's are improved, but could still be shortened a tad.

-- How would it look if the leg of the R dipped below the baseline?

-- I can see you are struggling with the lowercase a. What if you simply mimicked the bowl of the d? (See my horribly rendered version below...you get the idea.)

Anyway, keep massaging it and it will start to shine!!