critique this page out of a booklet

mandatorycannibalism's picture

this is a page im working on for a cd booklet in one of my classes.

how the layout? colors? font? etc...

your help will greatly appreciated

poms's picture

You forgot the link.

mandatorycannibalism's picture

fixed the first post

gdkid2004's picture

seems like an old post, but I'd like to point out some obvious problems.

1. The line length is too long
2. If the bottom of the italic title for the 3 piece is lined up with the third line, why not the first two. I don't understand the significance of putting the titles one line below the numbers.
3. Depends on what sort of paper size you're printing on, the point size could be a bit smaller.

I like the color and the font itself.

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