critique my flyer

coupdegrace's picture

These are going to print. does the background look better lighter or harder? How can the type be a little more exciting?

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litera's picture

Light background.

Type exciting? You've got your excitement with BUZZ. I don't think you need to attract readers into two different things. You'r BUZZ is already doing the job. The only thing I find distracting is the lines on B. the joins.

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