[CRITIQUE]: Poster gift for a newborn child

paul.w's picture

So my friend just had her first baby boy, and I've decided rather than buying her clothes, appliances or something otherwise generic I'd design an A3 framed poster for his wall. As it stands I'm happy with the final design, but I'm always willing to hear constructive criticism of my work.

If you would be so kind as to evaluate my piece and make any suggestions, I'd love to hear them.

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Regards,

Paul.

oldnick's picture

a little less air, perhaps, between to J and the a, and a little more air between the a, c and o; otherwise, rather charming...

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