Drammen

Frode Bo Helland's picture

Hi! I am neither a type designer nor typographer as most of you can probably see. However, I'm deeply in love with type:)

Drammen is sort of a starting point for my typographic self-education, and I will be glad if you could give me some feedback and point me in the right direction.

Cheers

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Pieter van Rosmalen's picture

Is it a typeface already or is this done in Photoshop. If it’s a typeface, can you type in some lines of text? The st ligature is very nice!

Pieter

Frode Bo Helland's picture

It is photoshop for know.

Frode Bo Helland's picture

My own comments, since no one else have posted yet:

The alternative stylish uc "A" seem wrong somehow. Something about the curves. The lc "r" also leaves a big empty room behind it. I also think maybe the alternative ampersand is a bit messy.

wormwood's picture

There is a lot of inconsistency between the character widths and serifs. Without knowing if that is intentional or not it is hard to comment on.

The spacing is inconsistant too, which I doubt is intentional.

I think it's also difficult to give feedback on something with such a relatively limited number of options. Just keep pushing those pixels until you get something you're happy with.

Here are a few quick suggestions...

I'm not sure if making pixel fonts is the best starting point for a typographic self-education :)

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