Logo Work Review

yona's picture

Hello,

I am having a go at my first logo and was wondering if I could get some feedback on what I have so far.

Background: The logo is for a gay pride merchandise company that wanted to avoid the traditional gay themed symbols (triangle, lambda, etc.)because the products are not traditional. (i.e. rainbow-themed)Key words were; unique,fun, friendly, creative.

I'd appreciate your feedback.

The attached image contains the (rough) original form, print version with colors, and the web version.

Thanks

timd's picture

Is it supposed to read MW? If it is I found it a little hard to read, however that is not the prime purpose of a logo. Where the outside and inside curves meets the horizontal there is an abrupt change and the interior curves need work to appear equal, the tip of the left and right-most interior curves appear lower than the others, this is getting confusing to describe I hope I make some kind of sense. I prefer the solid version at the moment although I find it a bit heavy overall.

Tim

GoAround's picture

I first looked and thought it looked like a logo for a railway network.

Then I read your blurb and the logo looks strikingly like a pair of buttocks.

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