grosner's picture

This is my first time designing a font… It's an illustrator file for now. Wanted to do that neon look thing… what do you think?

SuperUltraFabulous's picture

Very well done. I like it.


brett jordan's picture

yep, cool, simple... make a good display font

grosner's picture

thanks for the comments. I discovered a variation of the font by mistake today! I like it!

jennymarie's picture

Love it. Very cool.

William Berkson's picture

First impression: nice. Some problems with straight-to-curve transitions. Most noticeable on the D. Instead of a smooth round there is a bump around 1:00 o'clock and 5 o'clock. The M, V and W look wide to me. You need numbers.

litera's picture

the first colourful variation is problematic in terms of a normal TTF/PS/OTF font because it's not possible to have more than two colours (with font it's normally black/white)...

The variation of the font is nice but "E" and "F" are not distinct. Borh can be "F"s. "I" can be "J". Otherwise the variation is more liking and more original.

Ricardo Cordoba's picture

Nice work! This could work as a chromatic face, like H&FJ's Shades package, or also Adobe's Pepperwood and Rosewood.

Robert Trogman's picture

Don't forget what Hermann Zapf said, "a camel is a horse designed by a committee."

Ricardo Cordoba's picture

Heck then, let's do away with the whole Critique forum.

hrant's picture

> “a camel is a horse designed by a committee.”

How western. A camel is far superior to a horse in most ways.


RyanL's picture

Haven't you seen Hidalgo?

Also, the b&w is very nice. Good work.

cubix's picture

como la descargo?

zoraya's picture

Nice font, but i prefer the first version

caparica's picture

The first two color version could be released as a layered font.

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