feedback on typeface

vinu's picture

Hi!
I am very new to designing typefaces. This is my first attempt. So please spare a couple of minutes to tell me how I can improve it and carry it forward. I was wondering if the letters 'v' and 'x' looked like they belonged to the family. Similarly I am not happy with the 's'. But please give me your views on it. Thank you!

Vinu Chaitanya
Graphic Design student
India

ebensorkin's picture

Why not let two connectors narrow at the center of the x in the manner of the top of your b - for instance the lower right & upper left ones? Same thing for the join at the base of the v. It looks bloated so a slice out will make it better I think. Why not the right side? The l looks too narrow to me. Maybe it's just this rendering. To solve for the s - look around. This is not an uncommon kind of 1st font. One way to begin might be rounding those corners.

midbrain's picture

The a looks unbalanced, especially next to the b. Perhaps if you don't round the base.

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