What do you think of this?

casperobro's picture

I'm doing a visual koncept for a restaurant where they serve french inspired food. I have made this typographic logo from scratch, and are now beginning to stare myself a bit blind on it, so any crit would be nice. Thank you :)

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Stephen Coles's picture

I would simplify the peak of the 'A'.

casperobro's picture

Yes thats right. It points out to much.

Alessandro Segalini's picture

Do they serve courses carrying them upside down very fast to the tables ?

casperobro's picture

haha. I see what you mean. Not exactly. But its pretty motley crowd of people working there so i thoought it would suit it with some not so traditional lettering. They also just hired a waitress with tatoos starting from his hands endeing up his neck.

AzizMostafa's picture

LA is a smart ligature after the modification of A's Angle.
Other Recommendations:
Weld the 2 S' to get a Single fonty S.
Replace N with \ so that INE do not look too linear.
Good luck with Flowers

Da Kine's picture

Hmmm... "... hired a WAITRESS with tattoos starting from HIS hands..."
Leave it to the French to come up with something new and different. Vive La Difference!
DB~

hrant's picture

Maybe when the tattoo was started it was a he?

hhp

casperobro's picture

Waiter not waitress.

Thanks for the crit Aziz Mostafa. Usefull :)

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