constructive criticism wanted for trajan book title

nicholasgross's picture

G'day font people,

I'm nearing the end of designing a cover for an upcoming book and I'm using Trajan for the titling text. If you have time, I would appreciate some constructive criticism on what can be done to improve the look/readibility of it, I think it looks ok but something strikes me as being NQR, if anyone can help I would really appreciate I am a bit out of my depth at this macro tweaking level
cheers

Nick

nicholasgross's picture

Ok I give up how do I post an image up? I thought I had one attached, it was definately there in preview

dave bailey's picture

Should be an insert image link below the Comment box.

nicholasgross's picture

yeah, I have clicked on the insert image link about 5 times, navigated to my picture file selected it and so on. I have an error next to the link which says 'could not copy image. Error.
grr

dave bailey's picture

Is it CMYK? Try renaming it?

nicholasgross's picture

and I quote..

http://typophile.com
onHTTPError: 407

mm curious

nicholasgross's picture

BTW, not cmyk, it's an optimized GIF, thanks though

Termopolium's picture

Hmm, maybe you can put it up on another webside and link to it?

timd's picture

Nicholas, I had a similar problem in a another thread you could try removing any wordspaces from the image title.
Tim

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