Thoughts please!

outlook's picture

Hey gang,

Just looking for some thoughts and opinions on this. I finally got some ideas from paper to Illustrator.
Its also my first real forray into type design so go easy on me!


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Miss Tiffany's picture

Interesting take on a quasi-rubricated modern sans. I'd move the rubricated mark over more.

ebensorkin's picture

I would consider making the 'bites' in the right side of the B & R deeper to help the letters differentiate. There is always a balance between making letters belong to each other & making them individual. You have maybe gone too far in making them match too completely.

outlook's picture

Thanks for the advice guys,

I agree with both of you!

Hopefully ill have some time to play with this some more and post an update.


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