Feedback Plz.

satya's picture

hi friends...Im new here and this is my first post.
I've made a t-shirt design for my school's forthcoming monsoon festival(Monsoon fiesta 2006)....
Plz leave your valuable feedback on the design ,...I've basically played with the MF'06 and water drops which shows mosnsoon.

thanks a lot
satya, India

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tonicastro's picture

I think it's great. Don't touch anything. If I have to choose, I prefer the first, looks more original and you can see perfectly the water drops.

Lex Kominek's picture

I first saw the large drop as a hangman's noose. Maybe not the type of imagery you want to associate with a festival. Not sure if anyone else sees this, or what to do to fix it.

- Lex

wormwood's picture

I like this a lot. The 2 images are front and back, right?

I agree with Lex, the big outline drop does look noose like. I would loose it. It may be too big anyway, and it's the only place you switch to outline, which makes the water drop black and visually contradicts the ones on the crossbar.

You could just finish the F the same as on the back, and maybe have a small white drop hanging from it, like the ones on the crossbar.

The tops of the M could be a bit rounder, they seem a bit flat. And the cut off M on the back image is a bit harsh.

The Monsoon Festival sounds fun. Wish i could go.

satya's picture

Yeah wormwood..its fun...really fun...welcome anytime.
Unfortunitely the designs has already gone for printing...and thus I can't make any changes now...I liked the design when i made but now I realize that it could be much better if I had posted them here before i sent it for printing...anyway...I'll make all these changes before i'll add this design to my portfolio....and from now, I'll will post first here before i send them for printing.

Thanks a ton for the feedback

satya\
Graphic Design Srudent
National Institute of Design
Ahmedabad, India

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