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I'd like to get some feedback on this. This is a low-res version of a 300 dpi file, intended for T-shirt screen printing. Let me know what I can improve.
The g descender is nice but a little thick for my eye
I am going to have to agree with Hector about the g. Have you thought of drawing the stealths as vectors? Sometimes photos on tshirts look kinda funny imo. I do like the composition of the planes though, how it gives the feeling of one being under the other.
I don't think you should outline that mark in the background. simplify it and it will act more background and less like it is trying to be the center of attention. I guess my problem is hierarchy, there is not enough division.