Hello Petro

I like the white spaces you leave
in combination with the B/W "purity"
and the usage of types (FFMeta?).

Though i would need to see how the label
looks on the bottle (if not applying it on
a photo of the bottle -at least displaying
the label at the width of the bottle).

I would go for the second version
(with the element of branches), but
I would recommend the branch-lines to lose
their weigh gradually, as if they come out
of a pen...i think they will compine
more "natural" with the main line.

Sorry for the poor usage of english (i am greek).

christos

Christos, nice to see another Greek in here. Though I am not full greek I still carry on the name and the flavor. Good point on the lines getting thinner.

Cristian, thanks man. I am excited to work on this cause I don't there will be another bottle on the market like it. It will sell for around $40. Kinda steep, but the wine is actually very good. Steeped in jasmine flavor, with a nice earthen woody flavor. Anyways, thanks for the feedback.

okay...here it is with color...the client hasn't chosen...seems like it may be up to me.

if we do go with the trees, I think they will need some tweaking (i.e. thinning out the terminals was a good idea Christos).

or the lines in gray?

The bottle will be black glass? You won't see the color of the liquid? I prefer the single undulating line, not the tree version. Reminds me of a grape vine. I also prefer the white line to the grey line, unless you make the type grey also. The starkness, however, of the white is nice, especially against the black background. --- Perhaps a little nitpicky, but I think you need to work on the small paragraphs of type, you have some serious gaps and rivers. I'd add some letter spacing, not a lot, to the roman weights.

Great work, the organic look is simply beautiful... just two questions: How are the bottles going to be displayed? In which kind of retail environment? I prefer the single sexy line Mmmm.

So... Salud!

i like the concept of trees, but i feel like you nee to simplify. i think you should continue to explore the trees. if i had to choose between the three as they are, i would select the first one. no grey. red, white, and black is very sexy. i like the lettering. its striking and makes it look expensive. keep up the good work.
gfox

gosh these are really beautiful labels you have here sir! If i was minted and was choosing a bottle I would go for the second white label, simple and elegant. The branch lines are a wonderful touch. The black ones make me think of contemporary European film posters. Why? Who knows. but they do.