Business Card for Critique

wandar's picture

Please critique my business card. I wanted to have an abstract look.


Thanks

aquatoad's picture

Hi Wanda.

Your background and text are fighting each other to be the most important thing on the card. There so close their about to come to blows over it!

You can minimize the type by making it smaller and choosing one weight and color. Or, minimize the graphic by tinting it, or making it 85% on a blue background, knockout type. Also, consider cropping your graphic differently, try rotating it, try an asymetrical layout. BTW, any reason why the ball terminals are two different sizes?

Have fun with your layout!

Cheers,
Randy

William Berkson's picture

You might be interested in this thread for inspiration:

http://www.typophile.com/forums/messages/30/17882.html?1066151621

wandar's picture

Thanks for those links. The sites are very interesting. I going look into it and see what i can create. Thanks again. Great Sites!!!

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