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I'm doing a logo for a birthday party room & retail space for girls. Basically, 1/2 the place is a retail store thats selling dolls, puzzles, etc & the other side is a dressup, karaoke for the kids who have parties.
Its called bella club.
I want you to critique my logo (so far). Black is probably not the final color.
1- The diamonds represent a black & whote harlequin counter thats inside the retail area. Do you think the white is TOO white?
2- Do you enjoy the outer glow? Will this be hard to quality control when in vector (e.g. printing errors, etc).
3- Too adultish? Age group is 4-12. Mind you, the soccer moms are the ones paying for all this (higher income target audience).
4- My clients are trying to add a crown to this. Do you think its missing something or do you feel its finished?
Thanks in advance