Business card

wandar's picture

This card is a friends card. They designed it. Just wanted a critique on it.
More personal card than business card.
Thanks

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fireQuartz's picture

I'm not sure I follow the flow, probably because there really isn't one .. also, the graphic while very .. um, interesting .. I feel is a bit too submissive for the motto .. which I believe translates to "either conquer or die" ..

Just my two cents ..

-fQ-

Brian_'s picture

Is it Roman (romulus & remus), Greek (the quote), or 1900s American (Copperplate)?
Bullet points too large, and the phone number should line up with something rather than just centering it.

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