Dear Sirs!
I am owner on the site dedicated to Old Icelandic culture and history (though, it's in Russian only).
I know nothing in the typography and composition, but I just made new image for the title page of my site, and need some advices.
This image is here:


(Old variants are here and here)
The title page of my site is here

Is my new image OK?
I try to make rune-styled inscription. However, as you know, runes don't use horizontal lines, but I can't avoid them.

Norroen dyrd means Norse Glory (in Old Norse).

Any suggestions are welcome!
Thanks.
Tim

P.S. I am from Ukraine.