Logo critic for marketing company

mik's picture

Please offer some reviews / critic
Thanks
Mik

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mik's picture

sorry for all the confusion with the double post.

Chris Rugen's picture

Since I know nothing about the company, I can only voice my preference for the look. I prefer the second one (yellow balloon, sans). If you use the serif face, try the sans for the tagline. I assume the shape above the 'i' is supposed to look like a word balloon. Is that true?

Also, at smaller sizes, 'complete communications' will turn into ant tracks. Be careful. It should probably be at least 150-200% larger, I'd guess.

timd's picture

I have to agree with version 2, although the na needs a hair more space, the strapline (what is that face by the way?) seems caught between ranging right and centred under the yellow bubble (enlarging it would help avoid that). I think the bubble needs some work if it is to be a speech bubble.
Tim

krisdisk's picture

Version 2. But I miss something in the yellow dot, try a spiral gradient or something...but don't overdo it either.

K.

mik's picture

Thanks for all your help.

I have done a number of mods to those designs i shall post soon for discussion.

timd - The strapline in number 2 is "Plume DaMa"

Dav's picture

> try a spiral gradient

Are you serious.? :)

( As I previously stated, here, I like / prefer the 2nd version, but I still think you will probably loose the finer lower end part of the 'speech bubble' / 'quote' detail, on the 'i', when scaling down the logotype.. )

mik's picture

thanks

Dan Weaver's picture

To start "Creative Marketing" or "Creative Communications" work better but are very vanilla. Can you say something stronger about your business? "Complete Communications" once again could be a book publisher.

On the new logos: the top left the dot looks like a printing registration mistake. I like the middle left logo without the extra letter spacing. The talk balloon is cute.

mik's picture

ok thanks -- we are thinking more about the copy.
the general concensus is to develop the talk ballon one.

thanks all

mik

aluminum's picture

I like the talk balloon one as well. Also, 'creative marketing' isn't a very creative tagline.

Peter G.'s picture

That talk balloon is really great. I agree with Dan: I like the middle left logo without the extra letter spacing.

mik's picture

thanks all.

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