MLV- gothic, music inspired typeface

radiofeeder's picture

Hello Typophiles,
I was a silent reader of this forum and recently pull my gut enough to post here. I need some critique on both the form and kerning of this typeface. I create this for my final year project and inspired by some Postrock-ish band.
looking forward to your opinion, thanks a bunch!

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hrant's picture

The "A" is brilliant. Try to apply that idea to the whole.

hhp

Catharsis's picture

Looks quite original!

The rhythm strikes me as quite uneven. Try out some narrower versions of /A and /V, and fix the overly large space between /ID. Maybe reduce the spacing in general?

Don't worry about kerning until you've got good base spacing. Use a font editor that makes spacing and kerning easy, such as Glyphs.

Try punching a hole into the /V to make it less black, like you did for /A.

riccard0's picture

Quite difficult to discern between |O| and |D|.

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