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pugga's picture

This is a logo I am developing for a new wrapping paper brand. It will sell hand printed and hand painted wrapping papers. Please help me with any critique or comments.

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hrant's picture

I think parts of the "p" have to be heavier, for balance.

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pugga's picture

Thanks Hrant, how about the stem of "r" and "a"? I feel the "a" and "p" are falling a bit to the right. Could the connector between them be the cause? I noticed it just now.

anila31's picture

I think hrant told you the perfect thing and other parts are ok I guess.

Birdseeding's picture

I like this! I'm wondering, though, whether the W and the rap are not too different from each other in style; the latter's round, regular, relatively low-contrast shapes may clash with the rather more dynamic style of the W.

pugga's picture

Thank you all for the pointers. Have tried to tweak here and there. Have also adjusted "W" in the latter version . How do you think it fares now?

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