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Hello, I would like to get some feedback on my lettering. It is based in brush pen calligraphy.
Looks super. I'd say the aperture of "o" is pinched too narrow for print or pixels. You might consider just closing it.
Lovely. Perhaps the peak of /P/ could use some more weight, and maybe the strokes of /ui/ are a bit too mechanically similar. I agree with cerulean about the /o/.
Thanks both of you! I found your critiques usefull.
The O also doesn't seem to sit at the same angle as the rest of the letters, but besides that it looks great!
Agree with the above, even though the angle of the /a/ and /q/ seems to differ from the angle of the /o/ it doesn't bother me really. Overall the wordmark looks balanced and stylish - definitely has a 'brush' feel to it. Have you tried a /P/ with a higher stem as well (higher topleft)? Also, it would be interesting maybe to see it with a brush-stroke below the word - although you'd be at risk crossing the /q/ there.