Need Feedback: Custom Script

I'm working on a custom script as a logotype and would like to have you feedback - I have two versions with differing "L"s:

So, A or B? I feel pretty good with the "Hus" but I think that the "tle" still needs some working out. Additionally I'm aware of some of the Illustrator stroke issues with some jankiness that I'll attend to once I get the letter forms finalized.

Let me know if you see any other problem areas or have suggestions to improve it.
Thanks!

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