I'd loose the letterspacing in Carlos Ruiz and I'd change its to it's
Also, where's the follow-through? Locations to buy? Web site? If the ad catches someone's attention, you really need to give them something to do if they want more information about it.
There is too much tracking on Carlos Ruiz, especially compared to -Switch Ollie. For -Switch Ollie you should use either an en dash and word space instead of the hyphen or em dash and no word space.
19 Apr 2005 — 6:24am
I'd loose the letterspacing in Carlos Ruiz and I'd change its to it's
Also, where's the follow-through? Locations to buy? Web site? If the ad catches someone's attention, you really need to give them something to do if they want more information about it.
19 Apr 2005 — 6:48am
There is too much tracking on Carlos Ruiz, especially compared to -Switch Ollie. For -Switch Ollie you should use either an en dash and word space instead of the hyphen or em dash and no word space.
19 Apr 2005 — 2:49pm
Graphicly I would loose the brackets on the 4x and 8x they don't help the look. You need a headline like: No Way (that would tie it to the