Critique for a small info graphic

rainerf's picture

Hi all!

We came up with the following info graphic, which is intended to show that a university course ("Hardware-Software-Design") incorporates information technology ("Informationstechnik"), computer science ("Informatik"), and electronics ("Elektronik"). However, while this is the best I could come up with, I really do not like it... Any better ideas or improvements on our idea would be greatly appreciated!

Thanks,
Rainer.

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pica pusher's picture

Your graphic elements are overwhelming your type.

Note that when you peel back the idea you're representing, you essentially have a hierarchical list:

Hardware-Software-Design (is a course in):

  • Informationstechnik
  • Informatik
  • Electronik

From there, decide what you want us to read first, second...

rainerf's picture

Thanks for your input!

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